The Eitherworld's Banshee that was pretty incredible.
i really enjoyed the cinematic quality to some of your scenes, and your overall style. the story was really well done, the only complaint i could have is that it seems like there could be more to that story, and you could have drawn it out. maybe as your skills progress you could go back and make this into some kind of epic :)
anyway really amazing work, good story, awesome all around.